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The Piano Facade by threedayweekend
Oh wow Daily Deviation! I just now proofread and fixed all the grammatical errors from when I was sick (I wasn't expecting the DD) and also changed the pdf formatting to a more enjoyable 6 inch by 6 inch layout.
the use of the word "fuck" when Art is cynically thinking. Use "damn" instead. I can understand that proof-reading is a terrible process and it takes a lot of effort to revisit old concepts, but still.
Apart from that (which played a huge impact on me as a reviewer) I feel you've written a powerful narration on the death of art as a humane emotion expressed.
I like this text, especially this part "Art walked through the narrow glass tube hall and knew that no instrument behind a glass case can show beauty. The beauty emerges from usage."
It's obvious, but I had never really thought about it.
Now I no longer feel guilty for have sold my guitar, which I've never been able to play.
A text to think about... a lot of things. I am really happy I have read it, and hope you'll still have lots of dds.
Oh and I can't play any instruments either so that's totally a no guilt allowed thing
I hope that makes sense I might be rambling
You see, "Façade" is also a french word (You know, the C but with the little tail below it) but I also realized that Facade could be used in a couple of different ways of speech, that's why I was confused, but now I understand ^^
By the way! Congratulations on the DD"
Wonderful job, you really deserve the DD
that is really neat. is it a thing only for liturature?
1.) Click Submit Art
2.) Upload your content
3.) Look to your right, there's a premium content box, check it
4.) Continue to submit as you usually do
5.) You will be taken to a page where you upload additional art that can be sold for however many points you choose. (The for sale content has to offer something other than the art you posted. It can be other art relating to what you posted or edits of it.)
Congrats on the DD!